An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces A study reports that in nearby East Meria where fish consumption is very high people visit the doctor only once or twice per

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In this report,the writer argues that fish is useful to pr...
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...can prevent colds and lower absenteeism.To further support his/her recommendation,...
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...t Meria about visiting doctor is needed.That is because the writer believe that high...
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...fish consumption means local people eat a large number of meat,and the less number of times peopl...
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...or for colds means people get less cold.Therefore,the writer made a conclusion that there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 16.3942115768 171% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 384.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61979166667 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2888923897 2.78398813304 118% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.8473053892 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.840888001 57.8364921388 416% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.666666667 119.503703932 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 23.324526521 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6666666667 5.70786347227 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.25449101796 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13898911617 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683674698191 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067409082997 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782003267 0.128457276422 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700044818024 0.0628817314937 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 14.3799401198 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 48.3550499002 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.197005988 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.5979740519 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.32208582834 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 12.3882235529 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.1389221557 248% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.9071856287 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 16 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 425 350
No. of Characters: 2084 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.54 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.904 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.571 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 47.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 27.944 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.461 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.752 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.253 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5