Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 305 350
No. of Characters: 1524 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.997 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.077 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.05 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.375 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... provides little tenable support to the authors supposition. Hence the argument is inco...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 434, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ble support to the authors supposition. Hence the argument is incomplete.First of all...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...ition. Hence the argument is incomplete.First of all, the argument just stated that t...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 782, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ery minimal, like 1 in 2 billion, then, dont you think not permitting its administra...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...ody may not be as strong as compared to an adults to bear the strong effect of innoculati...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...t be a possibility of death in children.The argument failed to specify this. It jus...
^^^
Line 1, column 1589, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... of population, then it will weaken the authors inference.To sum up what has been state...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1607, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...en it will weaken the authors inference.To sum up what has been stated so far, the...
^^
Line 1, column 1829, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... i.e clinical trials to corroborate the authors inference.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 300.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15666666667 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22264728997 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3118349065 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.70786347227 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235898670444 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910379324417 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768486606836 0.0701772020484 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235898670444 0.128457276422 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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