Over the last 5 seasons, Dallas Cowboys have won 17 out of 21 games against their bitter rivals, the Washington Redskins. Hence, they are sure to make a clean sweep of this season as well.
In this argument, the author takes into account the fast five seasons of the game between the dallas cowboys and Washington Redskins and draws the conclusion that dallas cowboys are sure to win this season as well. The basis of this prediction being that dallas cowboys have previously won 17 out of 21 games against their bitter rivals. however, there is no mention of the team players being the same as the last five seasons. The main USP of a team are their players. if the players vary, then there is a chance that dallas Boys would not be able to keep up to the author's expectations.thus, the constituents of the team needs to lroperly studied. also, there is a probability of the coach of either of the teams who have changed the strategy of the teams and hence the whole dynamic may have changed.
there is also not enough evidence on the total number of matches played between the two rival teams. The author has taken into account only five seasons. if the total number of matches is more than that taken into consideration, the whole win-lose ratio may also change. hence these points need to be scrutinized properly before making such predictions.
The game dynamic may also change if a certain player is not in form for the last few of his matches. No such evidence had been taken into account. thus a proper study of the last few matches of all the players need to be done to finally draw a conclusion for this season. it can also be argued upon that the performance of the players depend on the coordination among all the players which may vary from one match to the other. this also depends on the real-life dynamic between any two players. The players' health, mental balance, diet , focus are also parameters on which the performance of a team depends. None of this has been properly scrutinised properly by the author before making such a judgement.
it is often said that failure and success are two sides of the same coin. Rudyard Kipling in his very famous poem 'if' termed them as Imposters. You never know how one may perform and whose luck may favour in a particular match. it is all a part of the game. thus, no one can surely conclude the results of a match unless it has been actually played. if this was the situation, then there would be no need for the players to play in reality as taking all of their past performances into account, we may simply predict the results of a match.
it is also considered that the crowd plays a significant role for the fate of a match. The applauses and constant cheers motivates the players and boosts their confidence, which in turn affects the performance. thus, we may also need to judge whose favour is the crowd more on. this may also give us some idea about the proceedings of the match. however, again it can be argued that just like one person taking the same exam at different point of time performs differently, performance is highly dependent on the preparation involved. thus, before deciding upon who may win or lose a season, all these points are required to be kept in mind and all the evidences are needed to be properly investigated.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 559 350
No. of Characters: 2502 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.862 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.476 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.389 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 46.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.721 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.383 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f 21 games against their bitter rivals. however, there is no mention of the team player...
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...e main USP of a team are their players. if the players vary, then there is a chanc...
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... of the team needs to lroperly studied. also, there is a probability of the coach of...
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...ce the whole dynamic may have changed. there is also not enough evidence on the tota...
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...s taken into account only five seasons. if the total number of matches is more tha...
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...e whole win-lose ratio may also change. hence these points need to be scrutinized pro...
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...h evidence had been taken into account. thus a proper study of the last few matches ...
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...h evidence had been taken into account. thus a proper study of the last few matches ...
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...ally draw a conclusion for this season. it can also be argued upon that the perfor...
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...h may vary from one match to the other. this also depends on the real-life dynamic b...
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...fe dynamic between any two players. The players health, mental balance, diet , focus ar...
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...The players health, mental balance, diet , focus are also parameters on which the ...
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...author before making such a judgement. it is often said that failure and success ...
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... luck may favour in a particular match. it is all a part of the game. thus, no one...
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...ar match. it is all a part of the game. thus, no one can surely conclude the results...
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...tch unless it has been actually played. if this was the situation, then there woul...
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...imply predict the results of a match. it is also considered that the crowd plays...
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...vour is the crowd more on. this may also give us some idea about the proceedings ...
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...dea about the proceedings of the match. however, again it can be argued that just like ...
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... dependent on the preparation involved. thus, before deciding upon who may win or lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2556.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 559.0 441.139720559 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57245080501 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48804283381 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 204.123752495 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457960644007 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.76694811 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1379310345 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.275862069 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41379310345 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.20758483034 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190478184892 0.218282227539 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507268651318 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090493496475 0.0701772020484 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110814395335 0.128457276422 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125179479059 0.0628817314937 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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