Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with

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Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.

For any telivision station, viewers are key factors for their success. At the end, all television station have to run their business for their survival. An inclination to a particular subject may lose their viewers. Viewers have certain expectation while watching any television station.

When we talk about news television station, they need to fulfill requirements of viewers. Lots of viewers are dependent on these stations. State news are equally important compared to national news. Suppose a person who is living in a particular state or city. He must be having his own standard lifestyle. He might have alloted timings for news. It is a general practice these days, that people watch latenight programs for general awareness which are like local incidents, city warnings, weather forecast, etc. Complaining is the only option for a viewer to demand their needs.

Advertisement at this time gain viewers which leads to business growth and popularity. Losing viewers leads to loss in advertisement. These all things are interconnected to each other. Restoration or alloting proper time to each kind of news is only option to satisfy needs of everyone.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lloting proper time to each kind of news is only option to satisfy needs of every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 2260.96107784 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 441.139720559 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35675675676 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83992201459 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.468620217663 140% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 705.55239521 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.8473053892 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6763794962 57.8364921388 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.9375 119.503703932 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5625 23.324526521 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173660995622 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586405095106 0.0743258471296 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684990486778 0.0701772020484 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119304072993 0.128457276422 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074459382342 0.0628817314937 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 12.3882235529 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.1389221557 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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