People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Emotions are a very strong feelings for human beings, we tend to get emotional quite all of time because of numerous reasons, which is quite normal. However, author of the prompt mentions people who makes decisions based on emotion are poor decision makers, I strongly agree with the author, I will like give my insight why i agree with the above prompt.
As humans, we tend to get attached to somethings, and the when the times comes to let it go, we try to hold on to it even when it is hurting our self-interests. These decisions are emotional decisions and we try to use logic to explain, why did we hold on to it. For instance, Tata motor which use to be one of the leading automotive producers in India, they used to produce to a car which was to brain child of the chairman of the company and this car was very dear to the chairman, and company invested too much many in this production of these car, but there no return of investment from the car, and company started seeing revenue losses, all the financial analysts and board asked the chairman to stop the production of the car, but he refused to do it. So in the end, that car turned out to be a very bad for the company, a company which went from largest producer to none, because of the chairman who made the decision based on emotion rather than pragmatic.
Let's take another example, In 2019 cricket world cup, Indian cricket team captain, took a decision to retain a senior player who was in a really bad form because senior player was to the captain when he debuted for india, and he got attached to him, it turned out to be a destruous for team india, and then he started justify the decisions, he said the player was in the team because there was no senior player in the squad.
In conclusion, If you want to be a better decision maker, you should be pragmatic decision rather than a emotional one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
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Message: Did you mean 'this car' or 'these cars'?
Suggestion: this car; these cars
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the largest'.
Suggestion: from the largest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42939481268 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38845968752 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495677233429 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.751371108 60.3974514979 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.125 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.375 23.4991977007 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264660599528 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140203530432 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131191912646 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176699400595 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989910009066 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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