Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in area where the disease is detected, but can't predict exactly where the cow flu will occur, and since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations,so permitting inoculations is a health hazard. Inoculations can also have side effects, That can have a long term effect on the poplution.
However, If there is concrite evidence that the disease is being detected in the same area regularly and there are large percentage of affected pateints. Then the we should permit inoculations in diease prone areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...area where the disease is detected, but cant predict exactly where the cow flu will ...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...will die as a result of the inoculations,so permitting inoculations is a health haz...
^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...e percentage of affected pateints. Then the we should permit inoculations in diease pr...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mit inoculations in diease prone areas.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 55.5748502994 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 541.0 2260.96107784 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 108.0 441.139720559 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00925925926 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 4.56307096286 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94198301497 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 204.123752495 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.468620217663 146% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 705.55239521 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.932466695 57.8364921388 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.70786347227 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 5.15768463074 39% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.56215419552 0.218282227539 258% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229070712774 0.0743258471296 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.277497649011 0.0701772020484 395% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356154748765 0.128457276422 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21861114421 0.0628817314937 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 98.500998004 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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