Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Art depicts our culture. Art is more pure and mostly found unnoticed. Art forms are rarely seen to be practiced. You can see many diversified cultures, each having their own art forms. Seldom arts are recognized, not everybody knows the names of different art forms present. At a stage where arts are difficult to be seen, its integrity is long gone disappeared. The government has to make sure that the art forms are reachable to the common people and more than anything spread awareness about the different forms of art we have. There are many art forms forgotten by the society, which needs the support of government not only in finance but also in liberation.
Adding to this, As u can see the society at present, there are very few people support arts. People are interested more in education which is good but art forms are nowhere to be seen which is unfortunate. Kids who are willing to learn the art forms seldom find proper teachers to teach them, which is even more unlucky. The ratio of students who choose studies to arts is nowhere near. Arts have to be nurtured for they share a very close relation with our society.
An example to this is Olympics which are held in every 5 years, it is evident that India contends in very few goners of the huge list of games conducted. Even if arts are practiced there are very few platforms for the performers to showcase their talent. Government must held many events hence, giving them a chance to present their skill. People think money can’t be earned by choosing the art forms which is only because of the improper recognition.
Building up, Baul Fakir is an art form which is no more to be seen, where people who are highly spiritual put their word through a song or a skit and enlighten the masses. Which was one of the favorite pass time for the people during the olden days. Kids of younger generation don’t even know about it. In order to avoid such situations and protect the richness of our culture it is very much necessary for the government to finance and support them.
Summing up, without proper recognition and knowing of its presence, integrity is of what use? People have to know that such an art exists with such a high integrity. Government has to take a stand for it is not the work which can be done by an individual. As it helps the World know about what is it comprised off.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s more pure and mostly found unnoticed. Art forms are rarely seen to be practiced. ...
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Line 8, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ork which can be done by an individual. As it helps the World know about what is i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229299363057 0.25644967241 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.193205944798 0.15541462614 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870488322718 0.0836205057962 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573248407643 0.0520304965353 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445859872611 0.0272364105082 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0912951167728 0.125424944231 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0424628450106 0.0416121511921 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41620137111 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382165605096 0.026700313972 143% => OK
Particles: 0.00636942675159 0.001811407834 352% => OK
Determiners: 0.0828025477707 0.113004496875 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106157112527 0.0255425247493 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.031847133758 0.0127820249294 249% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2372.0 2731.13054187 87% => OK
No of words: 425.0 446.07635468 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58117647059 6.12365571057 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268235294118 0.378187486979 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197647058824 0.287650121315 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141176470588 0.208842608468 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0964705882353 0.135150697306 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41620137111 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 207.018472906 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.469332199767 108% => OK
Word variations: 56.7219266304 52.1807786196 109% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.039408867 125% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.2022227129 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6001276594 57.7814097925 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.88 141.986410481 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.2022227129 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.24 0.724660767414 33% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.58251231527 56% => OK
Readability: 36.7647058824 51.9672348444 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.23021582734 1.8405768891 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449716562209 0.441005458295 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0951827030618 0.135418324435 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581651869176 0.0829849096947 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468864496262 0.58762219726 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12846463809 0.147661913831 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15449567008 0.193483328276 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952733687772 0.0970749176394 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437694060576 0.42659136922 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0409372050717 0.0774707102158 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317620476497 0.312017818177 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322960745519 0.0698173142475 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.33743842365 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.82512315271 207% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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