SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Middleburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Argument states that SuperCorp made best decision by moving its headquarter to Corporateville because number of homeowner proves that it is superior place to live, not a urban area, has lower taxes and safer place to work. This argument is rife with assumptions, which if proves false can weaken the arugment.
Author surmised that if number of homeowners proves Corporateville it better place to live, then it better place to do bussiness also. There is information provided about business conditions in Corporateville. Weather business will grow better and will be in profit or not. May be this area is good for living not for doing business.
Taxes are lower in Corporateville is assumed to one of the reason that SuperCorp made good decision, but no information provided how lower taxes benefit the SuperCorp. There could be a possibility that due to lower taxes prices of products and services are lower, which is not profitable to business.
This place is cheaper is one of the supposition also. Corporateville can be cheaper, but what about wage rates. The minimum wage is also lower, to get employess for company on lesser wage than Middlesburg. All the facilities are easily available or not. This needs to considered bofore reaching to conclusion about decision.
Corporateville might be safer and cheaper than Middlesburg but is transportation to go to work is easy for work area are far from houses. If it is far and transportation is not easy then people might not to consider to work there, they only want to live there.
Looks like Supercorp's decision is based on many assumptions according to which if people like live there it means this area is suitable to do business also. More business oriented inforamtion need to be collected to reach to conclusion that Supercorp's decision is best or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... that it is superior place to live, not a urban area, has lower taxes and safer p...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...rgument is rife with assumptions, which if proves false can weaken the arugment. ...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... of homeowners proves Corporateville it better place to live, then it better place to ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...eville it better place to live, then it better place to do bussiness also. There is in...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e, then it better place to do bussiness also. There is information provided about bu...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...etter and will be in profit or not. May be this area is good for living not for do...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ce is cheaper is one of the supposition also. Corporateville can be cheaper, but wha...
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Line 11, column 80, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... on many assumptions according to which if people like live there it means this ar...
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Line 11, column 152, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ns this area is suitable to do business also. More business oriented inforamtion nee...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243161094225 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.200607902736 0.15541462614 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0836205057962 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0699088145897 0.0520304965353 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0212765957447 0.0272364105082 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.09726443769 0.125424944231 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0334346504559 0.0416121511921 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94485621192 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.063829787234 0.026700313972 239% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0455927051672 0.113004496875 40% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0255425247493 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.0127820249294 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1829.0 2731.13054187 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 446.07635468 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03630363036 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.57801047555 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316831683168 0.378187486979 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23102310231 0.287650121315 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201320132013 0.208842608468 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135313531353 0.135150697306 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94485621192 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 207.018472906 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.469332199767 105% => OK
Word variations: 48.796284209 52.1807786196 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8235294118 23.2022227129 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3920554567 57.7814097925 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 141.986410481 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 23.2022227129 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.724660767414 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.58251231527 251% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.9258396428 51.9672348444 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.28125 1.8405768891 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366200184857 0.441005458295 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137686330658 0.135418324435 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104015399637 0.0829849096947 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578259980489 0.58762219726 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185669644652 0.147661913831 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138539134763 0.193483328276 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830513041283 0.0970749176394 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278702952081 0.42659136922 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0457571538376 0.0774707102158 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225579752986 0.312017818177 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645605403852 0.0698173142475 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 14.657635468 89% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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