SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
The article writer claims that moving SuperCorp's headquarters from Middlesburg to Corporateville is the best decision based on the points like - recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville , Corporateville has lower taxes , thus making it cheaper , moreover it's employees' choice who doesn't like urban area like Middlesburg.
There is a surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville . It should be known what type of people are buying house there , whether they are buying house for their current living or for any future plan. The number of homeowner is only greater than previous number with respect to Corporateville only , what about the comparison with Middlesburg? How is daily life in that area? What is the condition of road there? And other necessity like school , hospital , market etc. Employees have been moved from urban to not so urban area. Tough it was their choice also , but they were habituated with the urban facility , it would be necessary to accomodate with the situation in not so urban area.
As the writer has mentioned that lower tax would make the production cheap , it is also necessary to check what type of taxes are under consideration and how much is low. Suppose , the tax is low , but transportation cost is high. Then it may increase the priduction cost. So , befre assuming lower tax rate wouldmake the production high , the company should make the balancesheet by considering all aspects.
After considering , employees' daily life quality , company's betterment , it can be considered , the decision was best or not
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Tough it was their choice also , but they were habituated with the urban facility , it would be necessary to accomodate with the situation in not so urban area.
Error: accomodate Suggestion: accommodate
Sentence: Then it may increase the priduction cost.
Error: priduction Suggestion: production
Sentence: So , befre assuming lower tax rate wouldmake the production high , the company should make the balancesheet by considering all aspects.
Error: wouldmake Suggestion: would make
Error: balancesheet Suggestion: balance sheet
Error: befre Suggestion: before
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flaws:
minimum 3 arguments wanted. like this:
argument 1:
The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters.
argument 2:
Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban.
argument 3:
Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1268 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.973 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.872 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.81 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e number of homeowners in Corporateville , Corporateville has lower taxes , thus m...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...teville , Corporateville has lower taxes , thus making it cheaper , moreover its e...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...has lower taxes , thus making it cheaper , moreover its employees choice who doesn...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...per , moreover its employees choice who doesnt like urban area like Middlesburg. Th...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e number of homeowners in Corporateville . It should be known what type of people ...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at type of people are buying house there , whether they are buying house for their...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mber with respect to Corporateville only , what about the comparison with Middlesb...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d there? And other necessity like school , hospital , market etc. Employees have b...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d other necessity like school , hospital , market etc. Employees have been moved f...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ban area. Tough it was their choice also , but they were habituated with the urban...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... were habituated with the urban facility , it would be necessary to accomodate wit...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ower tax would make the production cheap , it is also necessary to check what type...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nsideration and how much is low. Suppose , the tax is low , but transportation cos...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ow much is low. Suppose , the tax is low , but transportation cost is high. Then i...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... it may increase the priduction cost. So , befre assuming lower tax rate wouldmake...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r tax rate wouldmake the production high , the company should make the balanceshee...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dering all aspects. After considering , employees daily life quality , companys...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nsidering , employees daily life quality , companys betterment , it can be conside...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...daily life quality , companys betterment , it can be considered , the decision was...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mpanys betterment , it can be considered , the decision was best or not
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14960629921 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95712340405 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.1696705481 57.8364921388 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195005247376 0.218282227539 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625607462243 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114916549608 0.0701772020484 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110622959377 0.128457276422 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127646614858 0.0628817314937 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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