Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Education is the best investment a country can do to its people to shape their future and to remove proverty. As Deweys says "Education is not preparation of life, Education is life itself".
Due to the high importance of education , it is excpected that students take proper courses that would help them to flourish in future. While studying in primary school and high school students generally go through almost standard course curriculaum and throgh this process they understand or develop their keen interest towards a specific field of study.
While it is simpler during schooling , thing becomes complex when a student enters into college life. In university students will have to choose a specific field . However it is expected that every university should have a education counsellor who will help students to choose their subjects by knowing his future goals and most impotantly that field should match the stiudent's ability and personality. There may be cases that ability conflicts with personality. For example , a student's goal is to become a manager in a corporate firm . So he is so keen to take management studies as his major. Also , he possess a good acadaecmic records . Along his core subjects of the management studies, university can advice him to take a foreign language class , which would help him later in professional life.
Thre are diferent criterias to be admitted to the university. Diferrent universities use different parameter to measure the student's potential. Some merasures the potential on the basis of prevous results where some measures on the basis of the interview. However students have always choice to opt for different university of choice if they can make it converted.
In todays job market , manyn jobs are becoming obsolate due to automation or moving to other countries due to outsourcing , so it is always advisable to expand their knowledge o horizon
In conclusion, there should be freedom in choosing their field of study by the students , but at the same time the university should advice them not to limit their knowledge and take various courses to sustain in this competitive job market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19484240688 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86495292229 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0539896119 60.3974514979 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172169403503 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05087744098 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423218813766 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807286805679 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611410935883 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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