Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologist discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
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In the study of the origin of woven baskets it was noticed that it was found only in the surrounding vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made singularly by the Palean people. Nevertheless in recent times, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. This river is broad and very deep, that the ancients Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Therefore, it follows that the "Palean baskets" were not uniquely Palean. This argument can be analyzed under some evaluations and evidences.
First of all, believing that the woven baskets was only from Palea because it was initially discovered there is invalid, as the research was not shown in any way to be detailed enough on its search for the presence of the woven baskets. Moreover, the fact that it was discovered in the vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea does not confirm that there were the producers, as no workshop for carrying out this craft was specified. Moreso, just jumping into conclusion that the basket would have been created by only the Palean people can't hold water, since it wasn't identified that any interview was conducted on the people of Palea to understand how the existence of the basket occured. Conversely, we could also consider that the people of Palea are armed with the skill of producing the woven baskets since it was discovered in their vicinity.
Secondly, with the recent discoveries of the archaeologists, that such "Palean" basket was found in Lithos which was an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. Making us to know that the basket is not uniquely "Palean". It may not be true because the Brim River is a very deep one and broad and the ancient Palean couldn't cross it except with a boat which wasn't found around Palean
So, since the Paleans don't have the opportunity to cross over to Lithos due to the river there is no way they can transport their baskets across the river. Definitely, the inhabitants of Lithos have the special ability to make woven baskets like the Paleans. Making woven baskets of Paleans uniquely for them, while the Lithos baskets although may look like the Paleans is uniquely Lithos.
In conclusion, using this evaluations the study will be cleared on the confusion of how the so called Paleans baskets was thought to be found in Lithos
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1976 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.694 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.64 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...n made singularly by the Palean people. Nevertheless in recent times, archaeologists discove...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t times, archaeologists discovered such a 'Palean' basket in Lithos, an...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... been created by only the Palean people cant hold water, since it wasnt identified t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...Palean people cant hold water, since it wasnt identified that any interview was condu...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ep one and broad and the ancient Palean couldnt cross it except with a boat which wasnt...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...uldnt cross it except with a boat which wasnt found around Palean So, since th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a boat which wasnt found around Palean So, since the Paleans dont have the oppo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...und Palean So, since the Paleans dont have the opportunity to cross over to L...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...niquely Lithos. In conclusion, using this evaluations the study will be cleared o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95923261391 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78687203512 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436450839329 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9940842606 57.8364921388 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.866666667 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 23.324526521 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.70786347227 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332568493783 0.218282227539 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133188955255 0.0743258471296 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105361424251 0.0701772020484 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188339930588 0.128457276422 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11586379692 0.0628817314937 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.3799401198 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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