"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
"Every child is a born artist. The problem is to remain an artist as we grow up". This famous quote underscores the importance of children learning the right tools for their growth. Every aspect should ideally be taken care of. One such important factor is coorperation.
Children, at their infancy, have animal like behavior. The natural instinct is therefore to survive, and to survive they lean towards the tendency to eliminate others that also strive for survival. If we leave a bunch of children at an isolate island with no adults to supervise, it is likely one or two of them would survive....
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