Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.

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Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.

Every coin has two sides. Personally, though some minor disadvantages existing in the education process, formal education is considerably significant for students. And education help students to create up their fundamental knowledge for their further development, meanwhile the moral education in school is indispensible for society steady. According to these facts, the education institute and students should try to avoid the creativity decrease, and maximize the benefits of education.

To begin with, education brings fundamental knowledge for children, which are often neglected by people. Som...

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Sentence: However, without the mathematics and fundamental knowledge, people may cannot keep accounts when shopping.
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Sentence: Though, in theory, the information and thoughts inherited by predecessors may restrain children's minds, the common knowledge avoid the ridiculous thoughts of students and offer children the instrument to develop the ideas into practical things.
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