Issue Topic:
The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree
Since the dawn of civilization, the man has advanced from being a primitive hunter-gatherer to being an utterly sophisticated species. This has been made possible only because of technological and social advancements that has been engendered due to spirit of competition as well as co-operation amongst men. No one can make significant and noticeable progress with only one of these in any field. In order to be successful in today's fast paced life, we have to be both competitive in what we are doing and at the same time, collaborating with others on our work and ideas. We have common problems li...
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No. of Words: 569 350
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.278 0.35
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 569 350
No. of Characters: 2776 1500
No. of Different Words: 272 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.884 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.879 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.867 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 184 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 143 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 102 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 74 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.739 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.168 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.497 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5