Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Deforestation has been an ever present side effect of industrial revolution and economic development of maodern world in general. The development of industries all around the world has been detrimental to the forests in surrounding areas.The main reason for this phenomenon is that the forests are the ready sources of major industrial raw materials.Firewood, charcoal and timber are ready examples of such materials.However,in the world of today the level of deforestation has reached that state where the survival of humans on earth itself is coming in doubt.So,the time has come to preserve whatev...
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Sentence: But now is the time for the governments to to make a decision on how much forest area the nation as well as the entire world can afford to lose.
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Sentence: Deforestation has been an ever present side effect of industrial revolution and economic development of maodern world in general.
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Sentence: The trees photosynthesise ands provide the life preserving oxygen while using the carbon dioxide breathed out by man and other living organisms.
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Sentence: The areas around which deforestation has taken place for industrilisation, mining or development of residential or agricultural areas have reported a progressive decrease in the amount of rainfall.
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Sentence: Continued deforestation might lead such places to desertification.The water cycle in surrounding agricultural areas gets disrupted, leading to draughts and shortage of foodgrain.
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Sentence: All the points considered,it is still impossible for any developing nation to immediately pass the laws of presrving the forest cover.
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