In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginative literature.
The man who has no immaginations, has no wings. - Mohammad Ali
The power of imagination has no bounds. The Mind needs to me stimulated now and then to keep up with the rapid lifestyle and competition we college students face. And there is no better way to do it than sitting in your favorite cozy chair ,reading a thrilling Dan Brown classic and experiencing the nail biting chase through the streets of Paris. The mind is a powerful tool and research indicates that humans fail to use a majority of it. If we do not stimulate our mind with immaginative literature , it will die of creativity and ...
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Sentence: The Mind needs to me stimulated now and then to keep up with the rapid lifestyle and competition we college students face.
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Sentence: Frequent reading enables them to have a good command over the language and auguments their vocabulary.
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Sentence: The man who has no immaginations, has no wings. - Mohammad Ali
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Sentence: If we do not stimulate our mind with immaginative literature , it will die of creativity and thoughtfulness.
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Sentence: Reading is both stimulating and relaxing.But as the above issue topic suggests, it shoud'nt be forced onto all college students.
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Sentence: Instead college teachers should propogate such habbits amongst students, enlightening them about the advantages thet readers can have over non readers.
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Sentence: It is an art to express complex thoughts in few rhythemic lines.
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Sentence: Readers learn about the art of storey telling and are more persuasive individuals.
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Sentence: Frequent reading enables them to have a good command over the language and auguments their vocabulary.
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Sentence: I beleive science fiction novels lay the foundations for future technologies, and who knows H.G.Well's 'Time Machine' could soon become a reality.
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Sentence: The moral values in an individual are often because of their cultural beleifs.
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