Unfortunately money is often considered such as a measure of success , but I don't agree with this opinion and I will try to explain why .
First of all we can remember famouse artists who were very succesful , but they have never thought to earn a lot of money to be succesful person. For instance a Georgian famouse artist Nikolz Pirosmanishvili ( Nikala) was a very poor person , but succesful because of his talantes . Money is not the mesure of success .
Secondly and very important argument is that we can't buy succesful it is imposible . For example we can't buy dream or sense .
In addition if you earn a lot of money - it doesn't know that you are succesful, because in the samy time you might be very miserable person . You won't earn all the money , so you must to have time ,keep your time for happiness and only then you can be considered as succesful person.
In conclusion - a lot of money is not equal to succesful , just happy person is succesful person and onlu for these people is opened all doos and wide all ways to success !
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 55.5748502994 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 2260.96107784 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 441.139720559 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57297297297 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54206796579 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572972972973 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7874099347 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.70786347227 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.25449101796 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177135671045 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762433068595 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555807457091 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895629307481 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556793444989 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.32208582834 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 98.500998004 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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