Nowadays when we live in the high technology age we have opportunity do business without leaving home, we can find a lot of advertisement on television or radio. Although TV advertisements can influence on the viewers , and most of this time we find out very useful goods or benefit information .
First of all, In my opinion advertisement helps to know new products then we decide buy it or not. Today it is very easy to check quality of products by the particular website where people who have already used this product say about its advantages or disadvantages. Eventually an advertisement help us understand what we want
. For instance, there are so many travel agencies that sometimes it becomes difficult to choose the right one, so advertisement about a mobile application on TV, help us in this situation too.
Considering all the facts show that TV or radio ads is definitely useful in many ways and sometimes it likes a magic stick.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88819875776 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03408041455 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0589422014 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098454495043 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457508385795 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0128798201935 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536285515638 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228493272193 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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