The statement declared, nowadays medias effect is penetrating all aspects of our life, with considering this fact, personas and characters that we used to assume them as hero are getting obsolete and out of vogue. Certainly, it is true, the perception that we had about persons with supernatural powers is waning consecutively regarding to notice the vast role of medias in our lives. In our era, we are not presuming people with extraordinary abilities as hero, nonetheless, we consider a holistic view that who could affect our life positively, they are our hero despite that we call them mentors these days.
It is undeniable that media gave people a puissance to attest and observe a vast expanse of people’s journeys. Furthermore, this comprehensive knowledge has changed the realities that we adduced them as hero in the past. As Socrates said: “The only good is knowledge and the only evil is ignorance”, this variety of information has helped us to distinguish real facts in our world. For example, Instagram application, as a social network provide us prompt accessibility of every incident all around the world which has developed this fact all human-beings can be as a hero.
Similarly, nowadays we are attesting abundant stand up shows which motivate us to carry on and pursue our goals. These entices were not exists for example 20 years ago and that is because of the merely reason of vast dominance of medias on our routine and diurnal. For instance, one of the most reputed success mentors, Brian Tracy is known and famous for his amazing and influential speeches. Without any doubt, he is an eloquent orator which has altered significant positive mutations in millions of lives. He is that hero in their point of genuinely.
Admittedly, ratiocinating someone as a hero does not appeal very hard and problematic theology wisdom and knowledge and you should not be an adroit to recognize someone as hero. Albeit, in a little child perception his/her dad is a hero or in a very sick patient his/her doctor that cured the morbid is hero. Consequently, the perception of a hero had transformed by medias that we could promulgate that now, everyone could be a hero and help others to achieve what they want in their destiny.
In sum, social networks, advertisements, TV programs all giving us this general perception that at least we could be our hero in our lives and follow rules for attaining that concept of ourselves. Medias has helped us to acknowledge this fact, as a paraphrase of what a famous actor said: “You are your hero ten years from now on”.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, nonetheless, regarding, similarly, so, at least, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98623853211 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90461888628 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548165137615 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6212046354 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.882352941 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190827529529 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626654908286 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275751342137 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109863224435 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278568047199 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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