To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

For comprehending significant traits of a culture in a particular community or a country, it is crucially considerable to put the powers of concentrations on big and major cities. Major cities could be a good sample for researching a society. First, regarding to ample facilities of big towns, people of a community are inclined more to emigrate and continue their lives at metropolitan. Second, diversity of different kinds of cultures are much more noticeable in major cities. Finally, the appearance of big movements and revolutions and etc., that are showing important stimulus of key characters in a culture, are mostly taking shape in big cities.

Generally, for conducting a reliable research after determining thesis and hypothesizes, specifying what you are going to put your research on, is vitally important. Studying characteristic features of a society is not an exception, major cities illustrating bountiful population of discrete interests that amalgamated from all over a region. They have tried to participate in modern life of big cities for centuries. With considering that, sometimes they cannot afford to start a life in main parts of them and that have led to the advent of suburbs. Hence, survey the metropolitan, both city centers and suburbs, would give us a holistic view to analyze comprehensively.

Similarly, big towns comprising a diverse disparate cultures that is giving us a beneficent chance to study accumulated kinds of people in one specific environment. For instance, Tehran, the capital of Iran, composed of nearly fifteen millions of people aggregated from all over the country. Researching on Tehran’s culture had been always illuminating a variant disparate cultures and traditions from all tribes and creeds of Iran that has been aggregated from all over the country, such as Turkish, Kurdish, and Persian communities. Consequently, when you deem to study about Iran’s people characteristic features then Tehran would be an ideological case of study because of the affluence diversity of there
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Analyzing characteristic features of a society or genuinely a group of people, should involve group activities of them logistically. These group movements could be shown in revolutions, associations, protests, festivals and as such. E.g. revolutionary movements of several Arab countries, which is called Arab spring, had strongly represented us the capacity of enduring dictatorships in those specific regions. Moreover, we could adduce more facts from other aspects of those movements. Such as ratiocinating the efficacy of technology and social networks on people in burgeoning activities to ask for expected rights. Thus, ignoring the role of major cities in researching culture traits is absolutely a fallacious decision.

Clearly, for pursuing a research on characteristic features of a society, the role of major cities for conducting it to reliable results is significantly important. The holistic view for comparison, the reachable abundant diversified population and the historic movements in major cities are several radical line of reasons to apprehend those wanted traits in a region from big cities.

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Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...arance of big movements and revolutions and etc., that are showing important stimulus of...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'reliable research'.
Suggestion: reliable research
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'culture'?
Suggestion: culture
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'fifteen million'.
Suggestion: fifteen million
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, e.g., finally, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, then, thus, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2694.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56611570248 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27158999489 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53305785124 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 864.0 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4094248051 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159861568137 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436296187857 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367238152272 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869641364796 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271039072008 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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