"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as
much by watching television as they can by reading books."
televisions are today, commonly found in houses, people are most reliable on them to get savvy of the current affairs that are happening day-to-day in the world. The prompt here states ,people can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books . I mostly agree with the author and argue that we can gain knowledge by viewing television as we can by reading books by providing two illustrations.
Though there are instances in which ,books bestow us more profound knowledge and meticulous little about particular things. Like, one can learn more about physics through reading books, conference papers, articles rather than watching documentaries on channel, most of the times it is also the case that while creating these documentaries or short films much of the content cannot be shown to the viewers as a specific time lot is allotted to these .so there are possibilities that spectators gain only half of the understanding regarding the subject. if one wishes to gain expertise in the particular topic then the person should read books in order to gain mastery.
But in this fast paced world, one wishes to get an immediate apprehension of the course that doesn't need much cramming though it's still useful in day-to-day activities . in such cases, televisions are very useful than reading the tedious books or novels. for instance, suppose an individual wants to learn cooking ,it is very practical to take help of the cooking shows that are broadcasted on the tv channels , not only it saves time but also a tyro can see the visuals of every important steps so that he/she can compare it easily and its also easy to remember the visual representation.
Secondly, current affairs are also necessary to facilitate learning of the a person and obviously on cannot get this information in the books also it is seen that in stock market where the prices of stocks are altered every fraction of second ,it is nearly impossible without the help of television to keep abreast of the volatile market.
In this age of television, both learning through books and tevelsion have equal pros and cons and it actually depends on situation or the subject of learning that which source is important and hence it is difficult to conclude
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Televisions
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...ns. Though there are instances in which ,books bestow us more profound knowledge ...
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...a specific time lot is allotted to these .so there are possibilities that spectato...
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Suggestion: If
...he understanding regarding the subject. if one wishes to gain expertise in the par...
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he understanding regarding the subject. if one wishes to gain expertise in the par...
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Suggestion: doesn't
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...still useful in day-to-day activities . in such cases, televisions are very useful...
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...an reading the tedious books or novels. for instance, suppose an individual wants t...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
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...ose an individual wants to learn cooking ,it is very practical to take help of the...
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Suggestion: ,
... that are broadcasted on the tv channels , not only it saves time but also a tyro ...
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Suggestion: the; a
...lso necessary to facilitate learning of the a person and obviously on cannot get this...
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Suggestion: ,
...cks are altered every fraction of second ,it is nearly impossible without the help...
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Suggestion:
...le market. In this age of television, both learning through books and tevelsio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93403693931 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69591823139 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.956508117 60.3974514979 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.0 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4545454545 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413217774272 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17128536795 0.0831039109588 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17069408621 0.0758088955206 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210931555571 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141446835929 0.0667264976115 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.