An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Doctorial study is one of the most difficult studies which needs immense amount of determination as well as passion. Doctor's are treated as one of the most prestigous people who are the life savior of a million afflicted patients. The author prompts that an ailing patient should have easy access to the doctor's record in order to determine the capability of the doctor to treat the medical condition. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the author's view as becoming a doctor needs IQ and skills which the doctor has already accomplished. Hence, i strongly disagree the assertion due to the following reasons.
Firstly, a doctor's achievement and degree itself determines he is capable enough to treat the medical patients though success in the treatment is always uncertain. For instance, a patient who's health is intricate and surviving through the disease is difficult at that time a doctor can try his best to save a patient's life. There isn't any guarantee whether the patient can be saved. The above example illustrates that checking the integrity of the doctor and analyzing the doctor's previous record will be of no help to the patient as each patient's health condition is different.
Additionally, Success cannot be guaranteed in any aspect of life but the hard work and passion play's its role in determining it. For example, Corona virus has affected the entire world and thousands of doctors are putting their efforts to produce a vaccine which can cure the detrimental virus but finally after a continuos effort a satisfying vaccine is found when the world lost faith in doctors. Hence, Miracles don't happen until you work hard. The doctors have proven themselves once again that they are capable enough to make miracles happen.
Obviously, there will be some who will argue that before a medical treatment one should access the doctor's previous records. However, in my opinion a trust towards the doctor should be must as they are artful as well as knowledgeable who performs their duty diligently. In my suggestion, the world is heavily relied on hopes for each other so why can't we hope and trust the skillful doctors?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...o the following reasons. Firstly, a doctors achievement and degree itself determine...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...ways uncertain. For instance, a patient whos health is intricate and surviving throu...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...ime a doctor can try his best to save a patients life. There isnt any guarantee whether ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...his best to save a patients life. There isnt any guarantee whether the patient can b...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...ll be of no help to the patient as each patients health condition is different. Addi...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'continuos'' or 'continuo's'?
Suggestion: continuos'; continuo's
...e detrimental virus but finally after a continuos effort a satisfying vaccine is found wh...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... lost faith in doctors. Hence, Miracles dont happen until you work hard. The doctors...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y relied on hopes for each other so why cant we hope and trust the skillful doctors?...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99162011173 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63854724946 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6553876042 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6875 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36564497387 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114922219743 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130259162976 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204767137278 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125272625392 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.