An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
In this 21st centuary of modern age, medical health has been the most major concern of most of the people living in this era. Due to the hazardous pandemic, earth has already witnessed a loss of huge number of lives. The duty to save the human beings has obviously been bestowed on the doctors. It is true that because of doctor's efforts and knowledge we human being are able to fight various kinds of diseases, viruses, accidents, etc. But as per the author's statement I also strongly feel that an ailing patient must be given an easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similar kind of afflicted patients.
Before moving ahead on why is it necessary to provide the access, lets first understand what are the consequences and benefits of not having such access. Its easy to understand that many of the patients are not that much knowledgable to understand what they are suffering from and what is the process they will go through for their treatment. Most of the people are completely dependant on these erudite doctors and trust blindly on whatever the medications are without knowing the background and success or failure ratio of the doctor for treating the similar kind of disease or scenario.
There are many possibilities if we remain blindfolded to any past records of the doctor. Asking for the records is very similar to checking for reviews of a product that you are going to buy. For example, a person wants to buy a mobile phone doesn't directly but it, where as he will check for the reviews of those people who have already used the phone. From reading these reviews he/she would get an idea about the pros and cons of that phone and will judge accordingly whether to buy that phone or not. Very analogous to the previous example, it is also a human right to know the past record of the doctor before investing your life.
Once we have the access to such records it not only wipes out all the doubts of the ailing patient but also brings a kind of trust in the eyes of patients and his family members. Having such access will grant an opportunity to the patient to think before proceeding with the treatment. There may be a possibility that a well nown doctor is too good in solving many cases but has a low probability of saving lives in a particular field of study. By understanding and analyzing these facts the patient can change his doctor accordingly.
Additionally, the patient will also have a sense of prior knowledge and would be aware before the process starts. It has always proven that someone's mistakes can help other person to not repeat the same mistake. The patient could also learn what are the do's and dont's that one must follow before and after the treatment.
Talking about all the benefits of having an access to these records, there is also one most important factor that most of the patient must always have and that is trust. Trust is undoubtedly very significant when it comes to your life. If you as a patient are handing over your life in a person's hand then it becomes very vital to trust that person. To gain such trust one must have a transparent knowledge of another person (doctor) on whom he is trusting on. Lastly, I would say that life is very precious to every human being, handing over the future to someone's hand requires a lot of guts and trust to do so. In order to help them gain trust on you it would be beneficial if patients are given such access.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...el that an ailing patient must be given an easy access to his or her doctors record of treatin...
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ment. Most of the people are completely dependant on these erudite doctors and trust blin...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e, a person wants to buy a mobile phone doesnt directly but it, where as he will check...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... a mobile phone doesnt directly but it, where as he will check for the reviews of those ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...alking about all the benefits of having an access to these records, there is also one mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, lastly, may, so, then, well, for example, kind of, talking about, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2817.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58048780488 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40133261084 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458536585366 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.0 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0509136901 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.346153846 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6538461538 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353861880667 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927502590224 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965280425369 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183458737424 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929293864643 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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