Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To be an effective leader, every leader should have moral judgment because without any sensible decisions, there can be bad impact in our society. So I disagree with the author statement that moral judgment is not as important as leaders ability to maintain to have respect to their peers.
Firstly, without moral judgment a leader might take harmlful decisions which is harmful for our society. For example in Raga village of the north India , where students were get sick due to having harmful waters in the school. Because the main authority of that school has not given permission to make pure water in the school due to save more money. So, his this judgment make suffer a lot of children. So, a leader must a moral judgment to save this society. Otherwise, many bigger issue can strike on people.
Secondly, when a leader do not have proper moral values, it can destroy our economical condition in our village people. Because most of the time they can not make their word to make better lives of general people. For instance, before election leader say many promises to develop the village and they can mak every solution of village people basic needs issue. But, after getting elected the forget everything and they just develop their condition by making more wealth for their future. Consequently, general people get nothing and their lives stay as like before.
Thirdly, If a leader has moral judgment then a country can become great opportunities of nations. For example, in Chittagong district of Bangladesh, where all the minor indigenious people can get every opportunities as like majority people. Moreover, Government made several shelters and schools for them so that they can earn money when they become educated.In fact this initiatives makes every people justified. So, having this quality is very important for a leader to make this society peaceful.
In sum, a leader must have moral judgment because to make a good decisions for our society. Moreover, to make sure basic needs of every people and to make a peaceful country one leader must have this essential quality of a moral judgment. Thus, every reader should have the ability moral judgment with the ability to respect his peers .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9972972973 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.461007925 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491891891892 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9707226888 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.45 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18730701434 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721424453383 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076175995743 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133507034156 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08733657708 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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