"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible
Sometimes people make any simple matters to very complicated as like twisted coils. However, it required efforts and courage to make any complex things simple as possible. As technology is developing people are cautious about its complex life but we should have courage to face it and think it as simple matters.
In this cutting science age, scientists are developing artificial intelligence to help human beings but general people makes it complex and trying to stop the steps to build robots for helping human life. But if if we use in proper way with our ethical values then making robots would be as simple as other cutting technology. For example, if people can manage themselves that they would use robots only when it is necessary to save their time then things would not be complex anymore. Moreover, situation also become simple by their efforts and positive thoughts.
Secondly, sometimes students angry on their students and that times things can be complex but if students have courage to accepts their deeds and obey the teachers then things would be so easier for students life. For instance teachers say bad slangs to students to to better results on exam. But most of the times students don't obey their teachers and parents also come to school to complain about teachers why they give punishment to students then things become more complex. But, if students use their efforts to do good results and obey their teacher, then things would not be complex , it would be simple as like transparent water,
In sum, I think if peop[le use proper efforts and have courage to accept the truth then things can not be comp[lex, it would become very simple. Also, we should have positive views that robots are creation like others daily life simple machines to make our daily life easier and students should obey their teacher rather than making the situation complex when they are punished by teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uild robots for helping human life. But if if we use in proper way with our ethical v...
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...d robots for helping human life. But if if we use in proper way with our ethical v...
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...on exam. But most of the times students dont obey their teachers and parents also co...
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...eacher, then things would not be complex , it would be simple as like transparent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93498452012 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30775879324 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461300309598 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9747118502 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244529670226 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116845572463 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096000392541 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183262415769 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574961985723 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.