"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction---in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
The prompt states that it’s comparatively easy to create things big and complex, but creating things with utmost simplicity is courageous and extraordinary. I agree with the idea for 2 reasons.
Anyone can make things that contains complexity and difficult to process and implement. To create things simple, comprehensible to anyone, and easy is effortful, brilliant and courageous. For example, science is vast and very difficult to understand. Scientific projects are often very compound and can’t be represented the expected aftermath with simplicity. There are lots of projects left unimplemented and unfunded due to complicated and vague representation. But to create projects and implement them effectively and simple to be comprehended to general people who are no experts in that specific fields requires intelligence, extreme efforts and hard works. Besides scientific projects requires courage too to implement as there are high chances to fail. For example, Elon Musk’s many rockets crashed during the launching. But that didn’t stop him to implement his project. He tried time and over again with courage and patience and finally he successfully launched the rocket. Myopic examples can be given in the case of failed scientific projects.
Another point is easiness in case of application. In this case, let’s discuss about scientific features. For example smartphones contains hundreds of features. But the smartphones with easily accessible applications and convenient to use in real life are the most wanted ones that people actually use. On the contrary the ones with complicated applications are less bought ones. To make difficult things easy to mass people, in this case smartphones, requires market analysis, unique thinking and courage to carry it on till implication.
In the final analysis, in the world full of creating trivial, complicated and big things it’s takes courage, patience, intelligence and real efforts to walk in the opposite direction and create meaningful things with simplicity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, finally, if, so, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57096774194 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03467474047 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1297124967 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.35 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22715045991 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578790563734 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831721342018 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141023371091 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340323828315 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.