“There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
Laws are constituted in order to run a country within proper specified codes. The prompt states laws are of two categories: just laws and unjust laws. And every individual is responsible to obey just laws and disobey unjust laws. I strongly disagree with the first prompt and agree with the second prompt for 2 reasons.
Firstly, laws can’t be categorized into just and unjust laws. Perception and acceptance towards laws vary from person to person .One law that is considered as just laws and accepted by one person might not be accepted by another person. For instance, abortion, that’s accepted by a group of people who have strong religious views might not be accepted by another group of people. Recently, Alabama, a state of USA, has banned abortion. The government of the country has witnessed a group of people protesting against abortion and another group of people supporting the law all together. Similarly, the world has been witnessing this sort of incidents regarding law acceptance since the beginning of civilization.
Secondly, every person is different opinion, thinking than another person in a society. And every individual has freedom to express his opinion towards laws. For instance, in in a conservative society like Yemen, women aren’t allowed to leave home without her husband’s permission. While, rationally, Law like this in the view of human rights is totally unjust, the women and citizens of Yemen obey the laws.
But, if an improper law against wellbeing and human rights of the citizens of a society/country is enacted individuals should protest to keep majority’s wellbeing intact.
In the final analysis, Laws should be obeyed that serve basic human rights and wellbeing and should be protested against if the human rights are violated and wellbeing is ruined.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... towards laws vary from person to person .One law that is considered as just laws ...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...owards laws vary from person to person .One law that is considered as just laws and...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...his opinion towards laws. For instance, in in a conservative society like Yemen, wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20547945205 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76316175125 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4500829312 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368490773757 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144422273638 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171069515924 0.0758088955206 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198418190527 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130888550677 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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