Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and even more importantly to disobey and resist unjust laws

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Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws

Laws are implemneted to keep people of the socity under control so that social bonding is not hampered. So, it is the responsibility of the individuals of the society to show respect for the laws and should never disobey them.

The statement assumes that people living in the society should act as judge for the laws that are implemented by the authority and should express their respect for the just laws which go in their favour and disobey those laws which is unjust from their perspective. However, it is true that what one see six from one side, is actually nine from the opposite side. Certain law may find its justification for some of the people in the society while exactly those laws will be considered as unjustified for some portion of people living in the society. So, in that case there is a strong possibility of generation of chaos and disruption in the society, though laws are implemented to maintain soicial order and prevent any chaos. For example, recently Bangladesh Government has implemented a law on motor driving: any driver who will involved in any accident will be subjected to trial and if he is found guilty he may recieve, even, death sentence. No doubt, this law has earned appreciation from every corner of the society but the drivers and people involved with driving. From mass people point of view this law will make the driver less reckless which otherwise they are not and will decrease the rate of accident. At the same time, drivers think that fear of the law will hamper their performance while driving and hence they are disobeying the law.

As a contrast to the statement, their is no absolute just an unjust law. For instance, installation of shops on footpath is violation of law in Bangladesh. However, it can be observed that footpaths are flooded with shops and there are actually no place for mass people to walk on. People who install those shops are actually poor people and by installing shops and selling goods in low price they earn their living and eke out their lives. Mass people though support the law against any installment of shops on footpath are happy to buy from those shops at low price. So, it may seem that the footpath law is justified and people should not install any shop on the way of mass people but if socio-economic aspect of Bangladesh is considered than it may appear that those laws can be disobeid as it benefits both the puechaser and the seller. So, in this case we cannot simply say that as people are not disobeying the law this law might be unjustified. In real world, this law is

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66887417219 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52417807124 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448123620309 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0573211725 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26125485531 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10739771142 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744884617863 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204651381813 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400699413561 0.0667264976115 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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