It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
It is critically important for us to enjoy anything what we do. Working for three days a week for long hours helps us to utilize the rest of the week days for ourselves, and so it is preferable to have a three days work week instead of five days week for shorter hours.
To begin with, three days work week enables us to spend more quality times with our families, which increases the family bonding. Working for three days will help us to have us to get two more extra whole days to pass our times with family members. Conseqently, we may go on long tour during those days which would help us to increase the linkage of us with other family memers of our family. On the other hand, five days work week provides only two days to rest which is not sufficient enough to pass a quality time with our dear ones. I can share my own experience in this matter. Five years ago, I had worked for a company which had three days work week, which means the employes had to work for longer hours during those days. Me and my colleagues found it quite enjoyable as we were offered long weekends. In those long weekends I used to go for hiking with my family to the hilly regions of our country; during summer times me and my family used to go to the sea beaches. Those times helped me to refresh my minds and to pass more times with the family members. Without that kind of long weekend it would not be possible for me to increase my bonding with the family members.
Secondly, three days work week helps companies to flourish as it increases the efficency of the employees. We need rest after an intense period of working; a break from the work helps the workers to refresh their mind. Without sufficient amont of rest workers would soon become inefficient. For example, my brother now works as a software engineer in a company which has three days work week. Thus he has enough to time to recover his energy by resting at home during those weekends. Then when he goes office againg after the weekends he can do jobs in a freshmind with more efficiency. Becasue of his brilliance and efficiencey the company has expanded a lot in the software field. It has made a lot of profit and is doing far better comapred to its competitors who have five days work week plan.
Enjoyment is the most vital thing while doing any work. Three days work week gives employees the opportunity to pass more time with their families, and also help the company to flourish as it increases the efficiency of the workers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... times helped me to refresh my minds and to pass more times with the family membe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...company which has three days work week. Thus he has enough to time to recover his en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42265795207 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27948978608 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435729847495 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0581257881 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393028305231 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123402958082 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12731425505 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294583789819 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124785428272 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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