I disagree with the statement that although sound moral judgement is an important characteristic of an effective leader it is not as important as a leader's ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Moral judgment of peer is essential for attaining the team's goal for which it was made. If the peer's performance would not be judged, it will be detrimental for group's success. Sound moral judgment is a essential characteristic a leader should possess whether it is about a peer's performance or a decision to be taken in favour of a team. Leader should ensure that everyone in team should work on ethical basis and should work in accordance with the rules made up by the leader. Leader should not discount moral judgment in order to maintain respect of his peers as it will not conducive in attaining the company's goal.
Leader should guide and correct their peers if they are going wrong in some direction. If a Leader would avoid doing so, peers will be reckless and they will do whatever they consider right which could salvage the purpose for which a group was formed. A Leader would be respected more if he would be morally sound and unbiased in taking decisions.
A leader is a great decision maker. He knows what is right or wrong for the team. He always keeps track of the actions or behaviour of his peers. If he finds something deviant he should notify that thing to that peer irrespective of the fact that peer would not now respect him. If a company is in bankrupt situation or lack in funding he should fire some of the surplus empolyees without caring what they would think of him or her. An improptu decision which is ethically correct for an organization is responsibility of the leader.
Therefore, I disagree with the statement that leader's ability to maintain respect of his or her peer is more important as comparatively to an efficient wisdom decision by a leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...tive leader it is not as important as a leaders ability to maintain the respect of his ...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
... of peer is essential for attaining the teams goal for which it was made. If the peer...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peers'' or 'peer's'?
Suggestion: peers'; peer's
...eams goal for which it was made. If the peers performance would not be judged, it wil...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for groups success. Sound moral judgment is a essential characteristic a leader s...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...roups success. Sound moral judgment is a essential characteristic a leader shoul...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peers'' or 'peer's'?
Suggestion: peers'; peer's
...er should possess whether it is about a peers performance or a decision to be taken i...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur of a team. Leader should ensure that everyone in team should work on ethical ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ducive in attaining the companys goal. Leader should guide and correct their peers if...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the actions or behaviour of his peers. If he finds something deviant he should no...
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Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ation or lack in funding he should fire some of the surplus empolyees without caring what t...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...ore, I disagree with the statement that leaders ability to maintain respect of his or h...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... efficient wisdom decision by a leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7005988024 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68084975902 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437125748503 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3216760367 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383043596339 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141014810481 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142779904854 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285935604014 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157679309569 0.0667264976115 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.