In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions
Who is beginner? What is his role in inquiry? A beginner is one who is novice in certain activity, who has lots of dream to accomplish, everyone is a beginner in his life be it from any domain either field of scholarship, sport, jobs, science etc. The beginner once starts his carrier has nothing but one goal to learn and achieve his goal and to do that he put his all effort and do assiduous task to prove himself. Therefore, i agree with the statement that during an inquiry beginner makes more important contribution than expert.
Additionally, beginner has one benefit is that he will not predict the results of the inquiry as the experts would do based on their experience. The beginners work will be egalitarian and would considered each circumstances and situation equally imperative and contributing to the inquiry where the experienced experts would ignore some of the facts as trivial based on their past experiences. For instance, a data documented that people often forget things that are mundane and a part of everyday work and consider as trivial for example, forgetting of car keys. Similarly, experienced person become so used of the situation that it sometimes lead to nonchalant behavior. Where beginner pays more attention toward small facts and will scrutinize even trivial details of the inquiry.
Furthermore, the beginners are very much assiduous and caveat during their initial days because the have to perform to prove himself and improve and learn. For example, survey of 2011 performance data shows that people from their beginner days till their 10 years of experience are very enthusiastic towards their work but once they accomplish their staunch position in their respective domain such as the position of manager, senior manager etc. They become complacent and relaxed. Whereas during their initial days of work they would do even extra hours to gain acknowledge and position the always dreamed of. Hence, the beginner are more dynamic and assiduous toward their work and have for core contributions in any work domain.
In sum, as statement is stated, it is absolutely true because beginners are always in hunt of opportunities and are eager to prove themselves hence, they are always dynamic and very much ardent to contribute and prove themselves to be an important contributor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun dream seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of dreams'.
Suggestion: lots of dreams
... is novice in certain activity, who has lots of dream to accomplish, everyone is a beginner i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iduous task to prove himself. Therefore, i agree with the statement that during a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...ners work will be egalitarian and would considered each circumstances and situation equall...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... of the facts as trivial based on their past experiences. For instance, a data documented that p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08923884514 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75425022155 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498687664042 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4152510411 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1875 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259853131126 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951866989132 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114578599144 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150795970674 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091309607234 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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