There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts – especially at a great cost in money and jobs – to save endangered animal or plant species.
What is endangered species? How they become endangered? These questions need to be answered. The animal and plant, are the most vital living beings on the planet earth, the whole ecosystem depends on the both of them, but there are various problems that have generated from the past various centuries that led to declining of the both animals and plants. There have been decline of various animals and plants species for example, the declined population of Tiger species, in 19th the century there was 9 sub species of tiger that was existed but within the span of 100 years, three of the nine species become extinct and remaining six are in endangered. Hence, question arise who is responsible for such cataclysm. The answer is very obvious the human intervene in the habitat of the forest areas, deforestation, and illegal transport of animal’s product.
Furthermore, if necessary action is not taken at this stage, we might lose the balance of the whole ecosystem. Thus, various awareness program have been organised to save endangered species both at the personal and committee level. For instance, the save tiger movement started in India in 2014 when only 999 tiger left in the forest, it took various efforts both from the government and local institution to save tiger, thus the data of 2020 recorded the population rose from 999 to 3000. This definitely shows that the extra effort require from the local bodies to save the endangered species.
Additionally, plants supports all living beings on the earth, the human beings and various animals to various birds, all utilizes the plants to full fill their needs. But as said, that more deforestation for human voraciousness lead various species of plants in endangered list. These require extra human effort to save them from extinction because the humans are the only reasons that causes such destruction to the environment. For example, the paper and pulp industry, if they only cut trees and make paper product than the day will come when there would left no tress to cut. Hence, it requires to also plant the tress to maintain the balance of the ecosystem.
In sum, we, the humans, consider or categorize our self at the top of the human chain, hence it is our duty to maintain the ecosystem and in order to achieve it , it requires effort both from the personal level to the federal level, we have to save the endangered species and plants at any cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tiger' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tigers'.
Suggestion: tigers
... started in India in 2014 when only 999 tiger left in the forest, it took various eff...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...than the day will come when there would left no tress to cut. Hence, it requires to ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the ecosystem and in order to achieve it , it requires effort both from the person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89294403893 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50877783152 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506082725061 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5743275276 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.294117647 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251263425847 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839682908814 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513735682369 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160115744063 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00723457305294 0.0667264976115 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.