There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money and jobs to save endangered animal or plant species Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statem

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There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

A statement, partially agreeable and definitely not entirely. Habitat conservation often implies multiple efforts, resources and duplicating laws; the traits of specific plants must be kept in mind, some of them adapt to ecological changes but others do not. Moreover, fragmentation has been found according to an ever-expanding scientific research base, to affect the behavioral patterns of localized phenomena, for example, rainfall trends in the tropics. So, in addition to climactic effects over prolonged time periods, exigencies emerge for facilitating a more holistic, focused approach to preserving it for posterity. However, the flipside suggests dispersed activities on part of multitude of stakeholders as regards this issue: competing interests, values, groups, initiatives as well as rules create a patchwork of different private, non-profit or even governmental actions for maintaining the ecosystem services taken for granted. There could be justification among a cross-section of society clamoring for earmarked funds diverted to alternative purposes-the various opinions may be considered and concerted means to persuade these people to get on board might be tried. Indeed, the common ground on priorities, beliefs and available tangibles and intangibles necessitate putting aside areas of discord for the overarching goal of perpetuating natural endowments for inter-generational gains. The aforementioned, emphasizes the importance of human civilization along with material life is inextricably connected with engendering attitudes and decisive choices to enable or improve the link between anthropogenic and the bounties all men or women that access.

The hue-and-cry promoted by particular sections with right-wing political leanings rail against the consensus in the academic communities, the personalities peddle perspectives about the broader abrogating of responsibilities: in stark contrast to the urgencies espoused with enhancing fact-based articles incorporating dissimilitude insights or methodologies, the demagogues double down on longer-term geologic sources; the intermittent glacial or inter-glacial time-periods, the cores drilled in ice sheets or also the sedimented rocks attest to no sole authority bearing the collective burden of present time-slot, to effeciently curb man-made emissions in the atmosphere. The profundity of the message attenuated by overriding business, seizing advantage of gaps in agreement concomitant with the evolved guiding principles of each compartmentalized civilizational-epoch. Furthermore, the acute problems associated with negotiated deals, monitoring and enforcing multi-party member to abide to emissions-reductions, instigates potential free-riders. Merely stressing on shared characteristics, targets or morality isn't going to evoke individual steps aligning with bigger picture. If anything, certain countries will defect, the proofs accumulated by inimical peer-reviewed papers from another field such as geology, provoke the signatory to shift the accountability as a red herring. The ways for moving attention away only limited by the imagination.

Instead of the above mentioned paragraph, environmental activists view the topic with gravity, the protests fulminating in pressures for boardrooms to ponder on the corporate mission, investments and standards accede to their awareness and expectations. The deforestation, agricultural destructions due to the food processing companies perhaps brings a narrower space of each person's divergence thereby encouraging creative solutions permeating from the top to the bottom of the pyramid: the senior managers, the farmers and governments increasingly find less seperation of the technical from the moralistic- the monetary amounts in cost-benefit frameworks represent the relative use to which the vast open-fields and oceans are utilized. Elinor Ostrom, paraphrasing her, pertains to the converging money and non-money quantitative at all stages of the policy-making: "Bureaucrats sometimes do not have all the information, citizens and users of resources possess." Taking cue from her claim, great expense for forests, listed organisms, overlapping regulations inspire indigenous tribes wresting control back from the power hierarchy, as their customs, heritage and direct participation can be ensured.

Finally, delineating a middle path possibly balances the contesting viewpoints in lieu of developing context with further accretions of data from many domains. Sustainability becomes a catch-all word for every sector: since Garrett Hardin states freedoms in open-access, unrestricted, generates a tragedy of the commons, the need for restricting exploitation of farmlands, undemarcated open seas or plundering precious metals metamorphosizes to be paramount. As because, enlargening evidence, synthesized writings of realms of knowledge grow, the requirements for musing on the implications of harmonizing economic benefits with reducing waste, alleviating threats on flora and fauna in their familiar environs demands minimizing replicated monitoring-mechanisms. The considerations of employment, traditions and native involvement makes the probability for lowering trade-offs of anthopogenic with the propagating of water cycle or nitrogen fixation as truncated. Eco-tourism lives alongside all living things, the scholarly works on scrutinizing anthropological remains, besides the extraction of timber for fuel would in likelihood co-exist, the odds of new techologies augmenting current methods of mining more quickly, inimitably with the native-americans, the whole host of options of less-disturbed co-existence.

In conclusion, the off-spring of early convened meetings deliberating on biodiversity and the longer-term statistical average of weather across huge time-swathes ascribe to a dynamic world. The older natural causes being supplanted by man-made contributory elements to the concentration of gases impacting on nativist species and inter-generational lifestyles. Understanding allied with irreconcible comprehension in social strata alludes to ingenious mechanisms for abridging the rationalizing of costs and moralistic-frameworks, reasoning for outcomes prudently subsuming a plural network of as wide and deep the ideas should be as germane to the endangered co-habiting with human-beings in earth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: isn't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...perhaps brings a narrower space of each persons divergence thereby encouraging creative...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...co-habiting with human-beings in earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as regards, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 134.0 58.6224719101 229% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5511.0 2235.4752809 247% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 871.0 442.535393258 197% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32721010333 5.05705443957 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.43256008957 4.55969084622 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6745274355 2.79657885939 131% => OK
Unique words: 602.0 215.323595506 280% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691159586682 0.4932671777 140% => OK
syllable_count: 1724.4 704.065955056 245% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.59117977528 126% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 25.0 4.99550561798 500% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.949951486 60.3974514979 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.44 118.986275619 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.84 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140289854856 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308873673664 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195537137357 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694706104755 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014479874346 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 14.1392134831 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 48.8420337079 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 12.1743820225 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.03 12.1639044944 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.01 8.38706741573 155% => OK
difficult_words: 424.0 100.480337079 422% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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