The biodiversity of natural landscapes behold exquisite flora and fauna that augment the aesthetic beauty of these places. However, rapid urbanisation and construction to bring about ease of access, and poaching activities due to the ever-increasing human greed has led to severe detrimental effects on these places of natural beauty, which manifest themselves in the lives of its inhabitants. The prompt questions as to whether investing significant efforts to secure the lives of endangered species is justified at all. In my opinion, adequate measures should be taken to prevent further loss of biodiversity. These should serve to protect the endangered species from all threats, deliberate or inadvertent alike.
Endangered species, often on the brink of extinction, are an important ecological factor that governs the balance of the food chain. Whether they are the predator or the prey, their extinction might lead to overabundance or account to even loss of other species. For example, the indiscriminate poaching of certain rhinoceros, owing to the pricelessness of their horns, might lead to dearth of food for lions inhabiting those grasslands. Such ecological disbalances would cause the lion to search for easier sources of food, and eventually they might turn towards humans, becoming man-eaters in the process. Eventually, as the boundaries between the wild and the urban gets disturbed, significant damage to life and property may happen. Such a scenario can easily be averted if stringent measures are in place to protect the rhinos in the first place, thereby maintaining the balance of the natural food chain.
Furthermore, certain species of plants and animals encourage wildlife tourism. If such species are not protected at the grass-roots level, they might turn out to be endangered sooner or later. This would inevitably lead to loss of economic prospects that such tourism entails. For example, people throng to visit the Sunderbans to catch a glimpse of the Royal Bengal Tiger. The population of these Tigers started to plummet owing to several factors, a few years ago. Several campaigns were organized to raise the awareness of the indigenous people and prevent any further loss. Forrest officials were asked to keep a keen eye for poaching activities and prosecute those involved. Such efforts led to an eventual increase in the Tiger's population and resulted in direct economic prospects of the Sunderbans.
Arguably the costs and efforts required to engage in such activities are quite humongous. Identifying strategic keyholders which determine which class of species be deemed as endangered also requires meticulous study of diverse populations. Furthermore, root cause analysis of why the species has become endangered in order to provide a remedial course of action requires perseverence and decades of study. However, such investments are quite insignificant considering the long term ecological, societal and economic impacts that loss of endangered species entails in.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statement that out efforts to save endagered species of plants and animals are unjustified. Since flora and fauna present in diverse ecological habitats serve to maintain the ecological balance, instances whether predators such as tigers or lions prey on humans are averted. A loss of a single species might lead to increase or even decrease in population of subsequent species, creating a ripple effect on the overall natural scope of beings. Furthermore, tourism prospects of a nation might suffer significantly leading to long term adverse economic impacts. Hence, it is prudent to spend resources when a potential problem is identified rather than scurrying for a cure when the problem has arrived and thus, all efforts to protect endangered species, no matter how arduous they seem, stand justified.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...f its inhabitants. The prompt questions as to whether investing significant efforts to secure...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eings. Furthermore, tourism prospects of a nation might suffer significantly lead...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3264.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 598.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93561098944 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523411371237 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1023.3 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9653352879 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162629881867 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448602141538 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519178895932 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932692579004 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292157231155 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...f its inhabitants. The prompt questions as to whether investing significant efforts to secure...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eings. Furthermore, tourism prospects of a nation might suffer significantly lead...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3264.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 598.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93561098944 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523411371237 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1023.3 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9653352879 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162629881867 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448602141538 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519178895932 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932692579004 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292157231155 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.