In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Inquiry, by definition, is an act of requesting information. The importance of the way and manner information is dispensed cannot be overemphasized, hence most companies look for the best when it comes to hiring individuals for roles of customer service roles. After weighing the evidence, it is certain that customer service personnel make huge contributions in firms of inquiry than the experts because customer service personnel are the first point of contact a client has with such a firm and their experience with the customer service personnel will determine if they will want to proceed with the services the firm is rendering or not.
Firstly, the information given out by the beginner is a first indicator to the client if they will want to proceed or not. For example, consider a quantity surveyor who is independent and runs a firm that helps to survey peoples' lands. Assuming a potential client calls in, requesting their service, and then asks the customer service agent how their firm surveys a large portion of land. if the customer service personnel is unable to give a coherent answer to the question, this will definitely mean the client will not be needing their service as he/she will go seek a professional elsewhere. So, the usefulness of the customer service personnel cannot be doubted.
Secondly, the first point of contact with an organization in the field of inquiry serves as the face of every inquiry firm. For example, even if a firm is filled with a good number of expertise without good customer service personnel, The company will in no time go bankrupt as clients will not be pleased with the kind of information they get from their customer service personnel which eventually will make the clients seek for the same service somewhere else.
However, the expertise can attract clients directly to themselves by referral, that is in the case where they are really good in what they do. for example, a neurosurgeon who is exceptional in his field will constantly be getting referrals not depending on how his secretary or PA dispenses information.
In Summary, the beginner in the field of inquiry contributes the most to such a firm as they determine if a client will proceed needing the services of the firm or not. However, there can be an exceptional case.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ill definitely mean the client will not be needing their service as he/she will go seek a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95077720207 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80317704609 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450777202073 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9852138783 60.3974514979 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873145290605 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333196448788 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349263074243 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614991248382 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353446807993 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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