In order to help small businesses thrive, the government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A small business, by definition, is a privately owned corporation, partnership, or sole proprietorship that has fewer employees and less annual revenue than a corporation. The contribution of these mid-sized enterprises to the overall economy of a nation cannot be over-emphasized. As such, I am of the opinion that the Government's role in the operation of private businesses should be minimal so as to enable them to thrive. Below is the reasoning behind my support for the claim.
Firstly, too much Government interference in start-up enterprise can be daunting, and as such lead to the discouragement of entrepreneurs. Leading world economies today are a result of the copious number of start-up enterprises which in turn empowers a good number of the populace. When Government regulations and criteria for starting up businesses are daunting, entrepreneurs are frustrated out of business and this, in turn, renders a number of the populace jobless.
Secondly, the Government should rather encourage small business owners by reducing the procedures involved in registering businesses. For example, one of the reasons America's economy is way ahead of European nations is the ease with which small businesses operate. It takes almost nothing to register a company in the United state as compared to its European counterpart. As such, more entrepreneurs are encouraged to start up and they eventually grow to lead corporations in the world.
Thirdly, in as much as I am an advocate of the Government's minimal interference in small businesses, however, the Importance of Government regulations on some industries cannot be downplayed. For example, the pharmaceutical industries require regulations to keep them in check from dishing out harmful substances in form of drugs or cosmetics to the populace. These regulations will as well increase consumer confidence in the products.
In summary, in as much as Government interference in start-up businesses can be daunting, A lasis-fair nation is certainly not the best as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42721518987 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37599202367 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6973205198 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204962705734 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688300280419 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662051832147 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112841780514 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439803030691 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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