In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
The author of the statement claims that the beginners are more like to succeed than the expert in any field. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time, while others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the argument and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Beginners are full of creativity, potential, and ready to do something out of the box or something that will bring revolution in our society. While on the other hand, experts are those who have experience and have seen many ups and downs throughout their life and career as well. Both of them will be quite different if they have face a situation to tackle as their level of thinking will be different.
In we take an example of industries or factories where state-of-the-art products are required to be created without pauses, it is likely that beginners are more instilled with a sense of entrepreneurship. They are not reluctant to take a risk in their life as they have nothing to lose, for example, the then CEO of the Apple Steves Jobs start the company in a garage with limited resources and money, but he continues with his experiments and then finally succeed. One of the reasons why he got succeed in what he wants is that he was young and he has nothing to lose if he fails in his attempts and despite a lack of expertise and resources, he could make such accomplishments by fully using his imagination and unrefined ideas.
But that does not mean the young or beginner are the only one that are required in every field, every field required leadership team that will handle the complete process and guide their sub-ordinate in their work and if the things are going wrong, they are the one who will decide that what should be done to make all the things in back on the track. The leadership team is nothing but a group of experts, who are familiar with different situations and have good experience to tackle different situations. So, we can say that both of them play a vital role in their field and contribute in their own way to the society.
Last but not the least, if an industry having a mixture of both expert and beginner in the required quantity and the success of that industry will be higher than the industry with only one of them.
In sum, both the expert and the benigner are important for the growth of society, individually they can do better but the combination will make a good difference in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57045454545 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56361117815 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479545454545 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7329824405 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.642857143 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183576264708 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747932382745 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117447266057 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953232513682 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426382139301 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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