Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
The author of the statement stated that leaders are those who fulfill the demands of their followers. Many of us will argue that this will hold true all the time. While others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the argument and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Leaders are those who lead everyone despite his own morals, personal interest, and view with which everyone won't agree, but they are created by the expectations and demands placed on them. They are expected to serve the demands, needs, and problems that people are facing. To being with, in early days when the era of colonialism and the industrial revolution was at there peak, people are looking for a leader, who can not only represent them and put forward their demands, but also fight for their right, show them right and encourage them, for example in 1900s when India was under the colonization of the Britisher, the people of India choose Mohan Das Gandhi as their leader to fight for their rights and make India a free country and in the same way other countries also choose their leader like in South Afric Nelson Mandela and many more.
Furthermore, the demands and problems also change with time, and thus the leader should be protean enough to change with it, for example, during the cold war era, the leaders of the USA and the USSR had immense pressure on them as both wanted to prove their hegemony in space. But currently, their roles have been changed with time. From time to time the priorities and demands will get change, so leaders should be prepared themselves for this and be ready with their vision as per the current situation and demands like in 19th and 20th century the demands was to developed or modernize their country without thinking about other factors, but now because of the change in demand to protect the environment and development also the world leaders come up with Paris agreement to keep the earth temperature less than 2-degree celsius.
Last but not the least, sometimes leader take the opportunity of their position for wrongdoing by declaring themselves as Supreme leader of their country like in Hitler did in Germany or President Xi Jinping of China declared himself as the leader of China until his death or by choosing the path of corruption instead of development, like the leaders of Southeast Asia Countries did and this is one of the most important factors responsible for the poverty and other criminal activities. So, If people choose you as their representative than they must ensure to work for the welfare of society, not for their welfare.
In sum, as mentioned above leaders are those who represent a people's point of view and their demand. They should work for their social welfare and if a leaser found guilty of not performing their duties, then they should be replaced by the new one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that this will hold true all the time. While others will counter this. In my essay, ...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...and problems that people are facing. To being with, in early days when the era of col...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1900s'.
Suggestion: in the 1900s
...m right and encourage them, for example in 1900s when India was under the colonization o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79191919192 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37341841829 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519191919192 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.727638368 60.3974514979 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.428571429 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3571428571 23.4991977007 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264917261432 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891279958244 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101140138997 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137906073976 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754305470203 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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