To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This statement argues for the importance of studying major cities to understand the important characteristics of a society. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time and others will counter the statement. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
First, major cities are the backbone of a country in terms of economy, politics and social and cultural, they employ major parts of a country population and represent their country at the international level. Even in some countries, major cities are much more famous than their capital and sometimes considered to be the capital of that country, for example, many people think that Istanbul is the capital of turkey not Antara. These cities offer many insights into the characteristics of a society as they subsume people from different culture and traditions, so anyone who want to understand the important characteristics of a country can study its major cities.
However, by studying the major cities one will get the vague knowledge or understand of a society's important characteristics, although, they would find people from different cultures and tribes and ethnicity, but, these things could only provide very little insight into society. To get a good understanding of society one should visit a society's rural areas, where the people still follow the same traditions and cultures from centuries, which is hardly possible to experience in the major cities of societies, for example, In India if you visit the state of Rajasthan particularly Bikaner or Ajmer, there you will find people following the old rituals and tradition, but if you visit the capital of Rajasthan Jaipur you will find this very limited.
Secondly, all major cities originate from small villages. Though most of the original village may be renovated and rebuilt. Some smaller cities may have even been major hubs of a society. People migrate away, what they leave behind may reveal a surprising amount about a society. Philadelphia, for example, was where the constitution was written, where George Washington became the first president, and where the United States as we know it was born. It is neither the capital nor even a major city of the society (the United States) now; it is certainly a worthwhile place to visit when learning about the history and the heritage of the society.
In Sort, we can say that studying the major cities would help to understand the society’s important characteristics, but it will provide a clear picture of their culture or characteristics. In order to understand completely, one must visit the rural or the cities that are still rich in its centuries-old tradition and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1610738255 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85640716708 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480984340045 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.753915772 60.3974514979 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1875 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9375 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394689298532 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133660483086 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122385869341 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223621181398 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890162527942 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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