If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
The author of the statement claims that you can do anything in order to achieve your goal but your goal should be worthy enough to do so. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time, while others will counter this. In my essay, I highlight why I don't like the recommendation, and in order to support my views I will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Goals are something that what we want to do in our life. It can be anything as per our wish and we can choose different method than what the society is following or we can follow the same path through which veteran or our heroes get success, but we should make one thing clear in our mind while taking any step or whether we will at the middle or we are standing very close to the success that laws should be followed properly or in other words in order to be a successful person we should not break the rules and regulations made by their country and by the international bodies. Because if take las in our hand than we have to a hefty amount of this once we succeed. I will justify my statement by providing examples in the following para.
As we all are familiar with the process of the education system that we have to score at least passing marks to be promoted to the next class and if a person with the help of chits or cheating from fellow classmate able to clear all the exam, but in this case, he will only able to clear the exam we won't get the knowldege about the subject and he will going to face the consequences of this in future. ake example of politicians who are elected by votes of the public. The motto or goal for politicians is to get a high number of votes. If they start using illicit techniques to accomplish it for example by purchasing votes of public or by giving something money to the community if all of the people of that community will give the vote to him. By using theses illicit methods he may win elections and call himself as a diplomat but does our laws allow it? Never, but he won the election, his goal which was worthy for him is may be accomplished by illicit ways but it is illegal for laws and whatever is illegal for laws can not survive in society.
In sum, we can say than goals can achieve through the various way but the ways should not break the law, then only attaining them is worthy. Else, as we know life is boomerang what you give you get.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: classmate
...with the help of chits or cheating from fellow classmate able to clear all the exam, but in this...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Ake
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Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, at least, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23399558499 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29236879771 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487858719647 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.300916685 60.3974514979 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.866666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876649719097 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352662422982 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445185903138 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606741719411 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249260575315 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 48.8420337079 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.