In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
It is said that there is nothing new under the sun. Thus, everything that can be discovered has already being discovered. The above position is extreme and would not be valid all the time. This is because both beginners or experts can make important contributions to their chosen fields by new innovations, propounding new conventions, or modifying accepted norms and patterns.
The underlying premise of the above is that beginner will try to make a bigger impact by working diligently towards the duty assigned.As we all know callow employees can achieve a task by breaking all the restrictions.However,experience also counts and for this reason who is knowledgeable in that field may contribute more to its development.
It is possible that beginner may face a few problems while accomplishing a given task.Nevertheless, experience or experts who have been working on that particular field are most incisive.They know all the do’s and don’t’s of the task because even they were an beginner earlier. People who have experience are ought to give better to the company.
Examples of beginners who have offered new ideas that impact a field of study abound. For instance, Leornado Da Vinci made more contributions to the field of paintings than his master and other established painters of his time. In the field of medicine, a doctor was able to identify the causes of cholera in a district. Also, experts such as Ann Curie after years of study made important contributions to the field of medicine.
Both beginners and experts contribute immensely to their chosen fields. Usually, the beginner is able to build on or modify existing contributions. For example Socrates, Plato, and Aristotle made important contributions to government and philosophy. Aristotle was able to build on the works Socrates and Plato.
In conclusion, either experts or beginners can make important contributions to their fields. Success is dependent on the individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39917559474 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 81.2071127162 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1176470588 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336750320928 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986986588893 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951241402939 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177661726945 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644914473033 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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