Students are more responsible for their educations than are their teachers.
Teachers are the ones who imbibe all of us with education and discipline. They make our learning experience edilble and push our self's to achieve greater goals in life. But does every student obey their teacher ? Are they responsible for the for carrying out valuable teaching?
Every person is responsible for carrying out duties his effectively by its own. Students willing to pay attention to teachers and keep learning new things relentlessly are dutiful.It depends on student to student.Teacher are solicitious about well being of all their students.They teach everyone in a particular class but it is student makes who a difference.
Some students take extra classes to perform better.Learning from different teachers for the same subject makes it preposterous. People who have determination to learn doesn’t depend on teacher.For Example, Late DR.APJ Abdul Kalaam(Former president of India and Aerospace scientist) used to travel miles by foot to reach school.He had dedication and courage to learn and reach the impossible.
Through hard work, determination and being responsible to learn and growth lies within student. Nevertheless, teachers who are the wheels of a car which leads us to our destination. Teacher makes our concepts and views conspicuous. They should have profound knowledge and skill to teach.
In conclusion, teachers must be educated and skilful to make studying easier for students. However, students are responsible for to learn or ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing new things relentlessly are dutiful.It depends on student to student.Teacher a...
^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Teacher
...utiful.It depends on student to student.Teacher are solicitious about well being of all...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... about well being of all their students.They teach everyone in a particular class bu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Learning
...ts take extra classes to perform better.Learning from different teachers for the same su...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...tion to learn doesn’t depend on teacher.For Example, Late DR.APJ Abdul KalaamFormer...
^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...to travel miles by foot to reach school.He had dedication and courage to learn and...
^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are responsible for to learn or ignore.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50877192982 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09897253085 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.5713216423 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331336380163 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123126098112 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089585468816 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204644604681 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777093709682 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.