In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting
points of view
progression is a distinct characteristic of human being that distinguish from other animals. human being has been progressing from primitive society to today`s modern society, whereas, other animals roughly stay the same. On promoting progression, scholars have been exploring the most method efficient methods. some pointed out that in any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view. Despite contrasting points of views is important for the development of human society, to say “in any situation” is exaggerating.
Admittedly, contrasting points of view is salutary for deep understandings of things. I. it is very difficult for people to have a deep understanding of things without a holistic point of views. contrasting points provide different aspects of views from one`s own that helps a person understand things more thoroughly from multiple perspectives. The thorough knowledge could help people progress on such matter more efficiently. For instance, one likes running. he thinks that running benefits humans’ health, makes people lose weight, and promote humans’ respiratory systems. Because the individual likes running, it is difficult for him to consider the cons of running. however, if someone tell him running may hurt people’s knees, then the person will have a wide perception of both pros and cons of running. Once one has a deep understanding of running, he would then find a way to alleviate the shortcomings of running, such as shorten the time of running or upgrade one`s running techniques, thereby to maximize the efficiency of running.
Although contrasting points have some merits for progression, during a sport match, contrasting points of view are unnecessary and even detrimental. team sports need high-level of cooperation. it may need some contrasting points for the match strategies during practices. however, during the match, players have to keep accordance to win the game. contrasting points of view during the sport match would devastate morale. this can be elaborated proven in basketball team sports game. during the game, the coach determines the strategies and players keep cooperation to win the game. if there is an opposite voice during the game, it would waste time, and make players confused. The confusion during the game will could decrease their motivation thereby diminished morale, thus cause the loss of games. e, to say that “a contrasting view is beneficial in any situation” is fallacious,
progression could be a process of self-exploration, with neglectable interference of others, if there is any. . When people have proficient knowledge and motivations to make progress, progression could be a product of self-effort Thomas edison’s experiments of electrical illumination can explain this point. edison’s first electrical light can last 13.5 hours. After he got the patent of his invention, everyone applauded him, however he was not satisfied for his accomplishment. he continued his study until he found a new material can make the electrical light lasting 1200 hours. Edison experienced more than thousand experiments. during his study, he did not receive any contrasting points, he just insisted on his opinion and continuously improve his study. e progression on light bulb demonstrated that self-motivation and self-efforts is efficient enough for making progressions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2937.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66988416988 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25822927431 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 872.1 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6558681327 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7419354839 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7096774194 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29032258065 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202892356665 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550596744766 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105446738722 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135773200692 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104169860077 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.