an appealing image has become more important than truth
It is very true that in today’s society, a created image that is appealing to the eye or mind is taken more and more important. However, one cannot claim that creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth. Otherwise, the author of the statement lamented the importance of creating an appealing image. In my opinion, an appealing image is as important as the truth behind the image.
Although creating an appealing image has become very important, the today world has put in place many systems that try as much as possible to uncover the real image of an individual before doing any transaction with such an individual. For instance, for one to access some places these days there are protocols that are used to ascertain that an individual is legit. This means that people are now becoming more cautious about the first appearance of an individual hence seek to uncover more about the individual so as to find the true image and character. This is the reason why no matter how a person may look presentable, they are usually expected to present documents so that their identity can be identified. Therefore, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image is very important, yet people also try to uncover the truth behind that image.
Furthermore, creating an appealing image is not gloomy. Oppositely, an appealing image is inadequate of success. This is because people from the word go are interested about looks after which upon acquisition of the good or item. It is same on human beings by the same token. Before having an in-depth understanding of a person, we use image that the person created to judge him. For example, an organization’s recruitment process mainly depends on the created image. Say, we want to apply a job position as a sales manager. Then we will emphasize the sales experience on our resume because this will create an image to make the HR feel that we are very professional on sales. The HR will then use the image that we created to consider if we can fit on this position. Although we need to prove that we really have adept sales skills for keeping the job or promotion in the future, being hired will be the first step to be successful.
An appealing image gives people confidence and alleviate anxiety. For instance, a patient was badly injured. After he saw the medical workers, he will have hope of live, and reduce his anxiety. This is because the medical workers dress and behave professionally that create an image to give the patient confidence and reduce his anxiety.
Creating an appealing image is also a way to express respect. When we respect or admire a person, we always want to demonstrate our bests in order to gain acceptances from that person. Then we will surely create an appealing image. We will behave properly, talk prudently, dress professionally, etc. The other person will then have a good impression to us. Adversely, if we dress slovenly, and talk imprudently, the other person will feel to be disrespected. Therefore, creating an appealing image is a very important segment on social contact. Sometimes, people even like to communicate or interact with a person with an appealing image rather than a person with disagreeable behaviors but charming inner. In this case, creating an appealing image is even more important than the truth behind the image.
Someone may argue that an appealing image will hide weaknesses thereby make people hard to see the truth. For example, governors often lie and try to hide their weaknesses in order to gain elections. After they win the leader position, they act not as good as the image that they created. However, a good leader should be a model role. If they do not even try to create an appealing image in front of the public, how can they be a model, a good leader?
Overall, the author of the statement is too pessimistic. Creating an appealing image self is a good thing. It is the first step of success. It is even more important than the reality or truth behind the image sometimes. Still less, in the contemporary society, the public has paid much attention as well as on the truth behind the appealing image.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3480.0 2235.4752809 156% => OK
No of words: 717.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85355648536 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17463580148 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72988317643 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401673640167 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1134.9 704.065955056 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.2370786517 208% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1493098998 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 34.0 10.2758426966 331% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474696359473 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141956704016 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156827679748 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297157277724 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165804530241 0.0667264976115 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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