To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
During the development of human society, the ethical and moral standards are formed as guidelines for each citizen in a modernized and democratic country, anyone who obey those would regarded as offensive and non-civilized. As for leaders, who are mostly discussed and exposed to the media, and producing massive influence to the country’s people, should stick to the ethical and moral standard strictly. In this case, I am agree with the assertion, however, without excessively scrutinized leaders every action.
First of all, leaders are important public figures who the citizens normally will look up to, their moral compliance will help promote a fashion among people to act the same. Obama, the last president of the US, for example, he is highly recognized as a figure who embrace peace, and reprimand wars as unethical actions that needs to stop, he won the Nobel Prize for the ambasseder of Peace, which influence great number of people and shaped people’s understanding about war and cherish the valuable peace time. On the contrary, Hitler, once a leader in German, he put into action in concurring with his unethical and immoral views to Jew people, his people at that time followed him indiscriminately, and started the massive killings of innocuous Jews. In conclusion, If being ethical and moral become the fundamental requirements when we are selecting leaders, we would promote whole nations’ sense of ethic, and people would act according to a high moral standard, tragedy would be avoided.
Moreover, highest ethic and moral standard is a cruel standard that require a person always be upright and sincere, and only a small part of population is able to receive is recognization. In this point, it would be perfect for a country to set this standard when select its leader. There are people who are skillfully disguise their venom intent when compete for a leader position, it would be wise to assign the important job to the person who truly cares about other, about the world, altrusic, and stick with those believes.
However, some would argue that media would use this standard to make a misleading judgement about a leader. Admittedly, by overly carefully assess a persons’ action according to a high standard, and stress a trivial mistake and overlook his/her great achievement is not reasonable. No one is perfect as we all know, and everyone need to study from others. This saying is also applicable to leaders, as they guiding the nation. People should give chance to leaders who are willing to admit his/her mistake and learn the standards of this society to correct themselves, if the mistake them made is not dramatic and understandable.
Overall, a leader should definitely accord his/her action to the highest ethical and moral standard, as for the people, we should evaluate their overall performance instead of focusing on negligible misbehave of their leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, as for, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17932489451 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83272376262 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535864978903 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5844335929 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4375 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138257781603 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479709800839 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346167957806 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852539310177 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372303533212 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.