To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to addre

An effective leader is one won the heart of his supporter and highly respected by his followers. The prompt's recommendation is, an effective leader should ovbiously maintain high ethics and morality. In my opinion, I agree with the prompt and arguee that to be a effective leader one have to first earn respect from his subordinates and supporter and for this he has to to be high in ethics and moral standard for following reasons.

In the bigining, before being an effective leader one has to be a highly respected person first. All effective leaders are one who is highly respected first. For this reason to be an official have to first have to high in ethics and moral values, than he will be able to earn respect. For example, the most successful leaders of indian subcontinet was Mahatma Gandhi, who had maintained an unquestionable ethics and moralitiy and maintained a very simple lifestyle which gained him respect and popularity among all of his people.

Secondly, an effective leader should not only be respected by his supporters but his also by his opponents, he have to won the heart of his anti supporters. Otherwise, opponents will not help him in overall process decision making on leading his people, this will devide his people and rise questions about the effectiveness of his leadership. For this reason he have to be respected by the opponents and only by being ethical and high moral standard he can do this. For example- African leader Nelson Mendela through his ethics and high moral values won the heart of raciest people of that time and made them self realize about their wrong doings. In this above example illustrates that, through ethics and morality a leader can earn opponents support and can be more effective leader.

However, though a leader should be respected but in modern complex fast world its very hard to be effective leader and maintain high morality all time. In some case to be an effective leader one have to sacrifice his morality to gain a better opportunity, for a better future for his people and for his supporter. For example, In this modern democratic world leaders have to win competitive elections to be in power and to win this election they have to expanse a huge amount of money. To collect this huge amount of fund they have to conniving and play tricks, they always have to influence and make unethical deal with wealthy and powerful people and groups.

In conclusion, though in some complex situations a leader have to make some conniving agreement but in the end of the day to be an effective leader he must have to be respected not only by his supporters but also by his opponents and for this he should have high ethics and moral value.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prompts'' or 'prompt's'?
Suggestion: prompts'; prompt's
... highly respected by his followers. The prompts recommendation is, an effective leader ...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e with the prompt and arguee that to be a effective leader one have to first earn...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...nates and supporter and for this he has to to be high in ethics and moral standard fo...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ave to high in ethics and moral values, than he will be able to earn respect. For ex...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...rters but his also by his opponents, he have to won the heart of his anti supporters...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s of his leadership. For this reason he have to be respected by the opponents and on...
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Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the raciest'.
Suggestion: of the raciest
...ics and high moral values won the heart of raciest people of that time and made them self ...
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Line 7, column 528, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have to connive'?
Suggestion: have to connive
...o collect this huge amount of fund they have to conniving and play tricks, they always have to in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77446808511 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61107783846 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402127659574 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4871299302 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6470588235 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228527012874 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111292809447 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563478638015 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172067348766 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343119996812 0.0667264976115 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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