To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to addre

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To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

successful leaders are what makes a nation successful. leaders are an important part of any society and how they rule their society has significant effect on its people. some people believe that the most important quality that makes a leader successful is moral and ethical standards. While on the other hand, some says that other qualities of leader such as trust of people and one insightfulness matter the most. I believe with the prompt that leaders should maintain the higher moral and ethical standards.

To begin with, having good morals will prevent those in power from misusing their power. For example, a public officer in city municipal might allocate fund illegally to himself designated for city’s parks. moreover, if a public officer lacks ethics then he might be careless in fulfilling duties and taking on the responsibilities of the position. Consequently, the public fund that comes from taxes of people’s hard earned money will not be utilized correctly and become wasted. therefore, having good morals in leaders and public officials are important to ensure the successful operations of the public departments.

Furthermore, it the leaders lack moral standards, then not only they will become corrupt themselves but also will be reluctant to maintain corruption free society. For example, if the prime minister is corrupt, then not only he will do corruption himself, but will also be less motivated to keep a check and balance on corruption of his ministers. moreover, if a leaders is corrupt, then the people in society also become like corrupt believing that they are less likely to be held accountable since the leader itself is corrupt. As a result, the corruption in the society rises. therefore, in order to maintain good moral standards in the society, a leader should vigilant toward any corrupt activities happening, but that can only occur if the leader is itself not corrupt.

On the other hand, people contrary to the view will say that other qualities of leader such as the trust of people in them matter more than anything for a leader to be effective. Although, trust of people are crucial for the success of leader, people can only trust a leader if he is truthful, have corruption free career and serve to the demands of people. this is only possible if the leader posses good moral and ethical standards.

In summary, good morals and ethics are the most important qualities that a leader can possess. this qualities are basis that makes a leader gain trust among people and become successful. having good morals will not only prevent leader from misusing their power and neglecting their duties, but will also lead them to keep strict check and balance on the activities of others. moreover, good morals will help the leader to gain the trust of people, which is plays an important part in the success of any leader.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03765690377 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61630096209 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401673640167 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9702953328 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.454545455 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188956674913 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736490317946 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496527984649 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118941183403 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257141921527 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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