The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things

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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Ideas are basically creative imagination and how it can be represented. The way to popularize an idea depends from person to person and also how they are perceived, a person's aspiration and determination is one of the key to spreading ideas and spread influence. The prompt suggests that the best ideas arise from a deep interest in commonplace things. In my opinion I mostly agree with it for the following two reasons, however I do concede that this is a convoluted issue.

Firstly, things in commonplace are more relatable to the general public as they are more accesssible to them and hence any ideas relating to the same gain more popularity and thus become the best ideas. For example recently Apple launched a device which keeps tracks of your keys and other important stuff, everyone these days carry a key or some kind of essential thing in their wallet or purse and does not want to waste time keeping track of it. Since this idea fixes the problem which everyone can related to and is related to the most commonpalce things such as a key, it quickly became successful.

Secondly, apart from innovation considering commonplace thing, one can also look at painting of famous artists who depicted the most obvious things in an interesting way so as to catch the eye of the common public. For instance, most artists painted pictures of fruit bowls and meals which were very famous at that time solely for the purpose as to reach out to the general public and thus in result gaining the status of best artists with the best idea among contemporaries.

One can always fix the commonplace issues by giving ideas but one might counter saying that as things become more complex, ideas need to be paralled. For example having interest in racing cars which is not a commonplace item and yet still there are people continously creating new types of cars with different ideas and even more so people are intrigued by it .

Finally, this is a complex issue and there is no clear answer and only one main thing matters, the ideas need to be a game changer irrespective of the fact they arise from commonplace or not while is it true commonplace ideas are more easily appreciated by the public.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'relate'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78851174935 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59192434913 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530026109661 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1380631247 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9166666667 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0833333333 5.21951772744 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378355478016 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15116740218 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129981450043 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219399975593 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523443082956 0.0667264976115 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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