As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Knowledge unlike many things is not immutable and keeps changing every second. The key to aquire more knowledge is to be eager to learn. As the knowledge of person increases or remains constant over time , one might wonder what benefit does having more knowledge has? The more knowledge a person has the more easy yet difficult the things are to understand.
A lot of knowledge can have detrimental effects only when we let it take over. As we see there are many flat earthers who believe that the Earth is flat, having acquired knowledge from NASA articles and other trusted resources they were completely shocked and some even refused to accept it.
Every action has a certain reaction and that reaction might lead to another action taking into place , but for someone who is only aware of the first action reaction pair which takes place ,things are simpler to comprehend. The more we dwell into the deep we realize it is not happening like we expected but sometimes searching in depths clears our confusion. For example Einstein initially fell in love with mathematic as well as physics and every little thing about the subject intrigued him, but later as he developed certain well established theories and got into the real understanding how things are taking place he became flummoxed and for limited period of time he was even depressed as he was not expecting his basic understanding would be shattered. This fortunate happening is the reason Einstein is appreciated by everyone as later on he proved many theories wrong once he had his gained his fair share of knowledge.
Gaining knowledge is always advantageous even if it makes things more complex or arcane. The only reason things are obsure is because one did not fully understand in the first place. It helps to make the fundamentals build to a point where it cannot be fiddled with and helps to increase our understanding. The first time Elon Musk started Tesla , he had no idea about how electric cars work. He read day andd night, did his reseach and increased his knowledge exponentially to a point where he had zero doubts and confusion about the functioning of cars.
As we can see gaining knowledge is always beneficial in most cases however it might add a little extra stress if things become more complex. One way to fix this issue is to start from very scratch to make sure no stone is left unturned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... increases or remains constant over time , one might wonder what benefit does havi...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lead to another action taking into place , but for someone who is only aware of th...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t action reaction pair which takes place ,things are simpler to comprehend. The mo...
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Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ace he became flummoxed and for limited period of time he was even depressed as he was not exp...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... The first time Elon Musk started Tesla , he had no idea about how electric cars ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, as well as, in most cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80291970803 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55362794072 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552311435523 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6832830996 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.117647059 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288868076702 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115262538703 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125570368 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177358147243 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105481955323 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.