The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your

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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Many people, especially in today's world, want to come up with next the big idea. Some of them will be abandoned even before getting to the drawing while a few others though they get started, will be eventually renounced too. Only a few the remaining ideas gets implemented and barely handfull of them turn out to be great ideas. The prompt suggests that best ideas originate from a torrid interest in commonplace things. I agree with the prompt and feel that a person very passionate about solving common problems is highly likely to come up with the best idea.

Firstly, let us start our discussion by defining what makes an idea a great ideas. We see some many problems around us - while some are less common, others are widely prevalent in a society. An idea will have the potential to become the best idea based on the number of people impacted by it. If an idea solves a problem faced by only a few people, however ingunious the ideas is, it cannot be classified as a great idea as it's impact is iimited to only so much. On the other hand, if an idea has changed the lives of a larger population, no matter how naive the idea is, it will be regarded as a great idea by multitude of people. Thus, on can call an idea the best if it has the potential to impact a large number of people. Now, for an idea to become the best idea, it should be related to some aspect that is very common in everyday lives. And to come up with such ideas, one should be passionate about the commonplace things. Only when one is deeply involved in thinking about the common problems can he come with an idea that will have a large impact.

Secondly, our history has taught us that to come up with the best idea, it is not necessary to invent something completely new but it will be sufficient if we can modify an existing process to work most efficiently. For example. let us take the case of automobiles. We have been running automobiles on fossil fuel since their inception. There were no significant improvements in how the automobiles ran as the spearhead fo automotive industry thought that they had done their best. But then can Elon Must who revolutionized the automotive industry by creating automobiles that run on batteries. This idea came up because he saw the same problem that everybody saw but from a diffferent prespective. His idea can be called the best idea as it impacts the whole world.

However, in the realms of our discusssion, we cannot ignore a few exceptions. There a few fields like Astro-Physics, Neuro Science etc that people do not commonly identify themselves with. A deep passion in such filelds can lead to breakthrough invention and discoveries who impact may not be immediately appraised. The ideas related to such filelds can also be called as the best ideas as they have the potential to solves conundrums that have been existed since decades.

To recapitulate, an idea can become the best idea if it related to commonplace things as they impact a larger population and this can happen only when someone is interested in quotodian things. However, ideas related to filelds like Astro-Physics and Neuro Science can also have the potential to be the best ideas as they solve arcane problems which may impact people in ways not imagined.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
... by defining what makes an idea a great ideas. We see some many problems around us - ...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... best if it has the potential to impact a large number of people. Now, for an idea to become the ...
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Line 6, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... to work most efficiently. For example. let us take the case of automobiles. We hav...
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Line 10, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to filelds like Astro-Physics and Neuro Science can also have the potential to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 578.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65224913495 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62752148551 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448096885813 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 875.7 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2603959634 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5925925926 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4074074074 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2962962963 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139053315698 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493430539756 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372791127872 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923874721697 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254645332514 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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